JLS (jlsjlsjls) wrote,
JLS
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An example ...

... of the kind of sentence that should be an automatic keelhauling offense for authors:

"Back in his small, almost brand-new office, in the huge, recently refurnished two-storey art deco building which had originally been built in the 1950s as a hospital for contagious diseases and which now housed the headquarters of Sussex CID, Grace sat down in his swivel chair."

p. 27 of "Looking Good Dead"
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